They work well to get a rough draft started, but will easily bore a reader.
Keep revising until the thesis reflects your real ideas.
A few suggestions below show how specific word choice sharpens and clarifies your meaning.
Use your own words in thesis statements; avoid quoting.
Do not assume, for example, that you have the same understanding of what “society” means as your reader.
To avoid misunderstandings, be as specific as possible.
The argument(s) you make in your paper should reflect this main idea.
The sentence that captures your position on this main idea is what we call a thesis statement.
Being specific in your paper will be much more successful than writing about general things that do not say much.
Don't settle for three pages of just skimming the surface.