Now, when drafting your personal statement, I urge you to bear in mind the below list of ‘dos and don’ts’ as these will help strengthen the quality of your writing.
The simple trick of including the below doing-words will help bring your achievements to life on your personal statement: To demonstrate your creativity, use: built, crafted, devised, implemented, pioneered, initiated, established To demonstrate your efficiency, use: enhanced, advanced, capitalised, maximised, leveraged, improved To demonstrate your leadership skills, use: headed, coordinated, executed, managed, operated, organised, lead To demonstrate improvements made, use: refined, remodelled, strengthened, upgraded, transformed To demonstrate your management skills, use: guided, fostered, motivated, recruited, enabled, united To demonstrate bottom line contributions, use: reduced, decreased, consolidated, saved, yielded, increased To demonstrate overall achievements, use: awarded, exceeded, outperformed, surpassed, earned, granted The below example shows in bold where Carli Lloyd, player for Manchester City Women’s uses action verbs on her CV.
The first thing a recruiter or hiring manager wants to know when reading your personal statement is who you are and what level of experience you have.
As you can see from the below example, Steph gets straight to these facts in her introduction, while at the same time, avoiding clichés and vague information.
Example Profiles A responsible, intelligent and experienced retail professional with an extensive background in fashion and children’s wear both in large departments and small boutiques.
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Highly creative, adaptable and bright individual with an excellent eye for visual detail and design.
So what should this heading or opening paragraph include?
In addition it should entice the reader to want to know more and go on to read the rest of your cv or application form.
Your personal statement is basically your sales or elevator pitch on paper.
It is the first thing a hiring manager will read on your CV, and will, therefore, have a huge bearing on whether they choose to read on and ultimately invite you for an interview.